these are looking a little flat for me, there’s definitely room for improvement. try experimenting with different fonts, maybe an old English type used on a lot of tattoos. the patterns are an interesting idea, but would look better with a texture over them. there’s a lot of negative space on the one with the handcuffs so maybe the solution could be to do something in the back like you did with the hat.
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Thanh Nguyen | October 18, 2010 at 4:18 PM
these are looking a little flat for me, there’s definitely room for improvement. try experimenting with different fonts, maybe an old English type used on a lot of tattoos. the patterns are an interesting idea, but would look better with a texture over them. there’s a lot of negative space on the one with the handcuffs so maybe the solution could be to do something in the back like you did with the hat.